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Title: Things Kept (Caliban Bass n' Drums Remix)
Author: Aris Merquoni ([livejournal.com profile] aris_tgd, [livejournal.com profile] aris_writing
Summary: Harriet Jones has always had her reasons, and always had her pride.
Rating: PG
Fandom: Doctor Who (New Series)
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: Through the end of Series 3
Title, Author and URL of original story: Keepsakes, Rivrea ([livejournal.com profile] having_written), http://having-written.livejournal.com/16549.html
Note: Thanks to my betas, [livejournal.com profile] dz_crasher, [livejournal.com profile] angevin2, Beta Number One, [livejournal.com profile] liviapenn, and anyone else I threw this story at to look over in a fit of flail. Betas are the best.

--

When the vote of No Confidence passed, Harriet Jones seriously contemplated resigning; she believed in her party as firmly as she believed in her country, and there were others who could take over the government in her absence. But the jackals of the opposition were circling already, and she refused to expose the party's underbelly by admitting defeat. So head high, she called for the general election and bet everything on her ability to carry the day.

She assumed the Doctor was watching somewhere, feeling proud of himself. He'd proved the power of one man's ability to divert history, yet again.

--

When Harriet was quite young, her family had gone on holiday to visit relations in America. She remembered endless hours on an aeroplane and in a car, jouncing along mountain roads until they spilled out under the deep blue sky of the Sierra Nevada mountain range, the world framed by fences of green pine and walls of sheer rock.

In those days there were places the park had set up to watch the black bears feed on rubbish. Harriet perched on a tin bench and listened to a park ranger with a thick drawl explain, "It's the mothers with cubs you have to be the most careful of. You get a momma bear defending her cubs, and she'll do anything to make sure her babies are safe."

--

Harold Saxon was young.

Harold Saxon was charismatic.

Harriet Jones promised strength of character, strength of will, strength of national pride in the face of a strange, hostile universe.

Harold Saxon promised change, vision, new ideas.

Harriet Jones watched the nation turn away.

--

When Dr. Lazarus' press conference went on the air, her staff took some time off to watch it. "Regeneration machine?" Deborah, another old political warhorse, asked. "We could use one of those around here." Then she laughed, bitterly.

Harriet didn't get angry at her. Maybe they were all right. Maybe she was too tired to be doing this, any more. She felt exhausted, after fighting an uphill battle against Saxon's popularity for months.

It took a few hours and a few phone calls to get information about Lazarus after everything went awry, but finally the story came out. The Doctor had been there, of course. The Doctor was always there to fix things.

Harriet dreamed that night. She grew into a giant monster, many-legged, hideous; she clutched the leader of the Sycorax in her hands. The Doctor was watching her, angry, yelling "You were only supposed to attack what I pointed at!" She tried to tell him he hadn't been there, he hadn't been pointing, and his hands were too small to see, but she couldn't make her mouth form the words.

It only occurred to her when she woke up sweating that the argument she really believed in was one she hadn't thought of making. That the Doctor had no right to decide who lived, who died. Not in her country. Not on her watch.

--

She'd had to clear out her office--which, frankly, had only recently started feeling like her office instead of "The Prime Minister's office which one Harriet Jones was currently occupying."

She had a piece of rubble from the Downing Street explosion, just the size to serve as a paperweight. When her hand curled around the fragment of rock, she was overwhelmed by memories of that awful day with the Slitheen, the Doctor, and that young woman Rose. She wished rather suddenly that the Doctor was there so she could bounce it off his head.

Every step, she thought, closing her eyes, every step she'd taken had been to protect her country, her England.

And the damnable thing of it all was it was all invisible. The work she'd done tracking down Torchwood had been on her own time; she'd carefully weighed the knowledge when she had it and put it away in a corner of her mind, not to be used unless in the gravest of circumstances. She'd done her best to stall the Sycorax, to reason with them, to buy time for the salvation of the men and women counting on her. Until the Doctor's eleventh-hour save.

Shakespeare's Sycorax had also been a mother. She thought about Caliban crying in the wilderness, and about the ash of alien warships. She tucked the piece of rubble into her handbag, hands steady and calm.

--

Much later, Harriet Jones, Prime Minister (again, by default) found herself overseeing another reconstruction, putting together the government in the wake of Saxon's death.

It wasn't any particular day when he finally showed up. She had just laid her handbag on her desk, and then she sensed the presence behind her--the strange aura he carried, like static electricity and the smell of tea, prickly and familiar.

"I wondered how long it would take you to stop by," she said without turning.

"Er, yeah," the Doctor said. "Sorry about that."

She sighed and turned around. He was standing a few feet away, hands in the pockets of a slightly-too-large coat, ridiculous red trainers sticking out from underneath pinstriped trousers. She'd seen him briefly on the telly, up on the Valiant, but hadn't gotten a good look; he looked just as suited to saving the world as he had in a dressing gown.

She couldn't help smiling, tiredly. "Well, thank you, I suppose. Again."

"Oh, that? That was..." he hemmed and hawwed for a second, then finished, "Martha did all the real work, anyway, but I suppose it was a good bit near the end."

"Martha?"

"Yeah, Martha." He inhaled with a long hiss, then admitted, "She took off, actually. Tired of it."

"I can't imagine."

The Doctor pursed his lips, took a moment to study the tips of his shoes, and finally said, "It occurs to me that I may have... overreacted. When I, erm... with the whole. Sycorax. Thing."

Harriet crossed her arms over her chest. "Doctor, applying your own code of ethics to the entire Earth might be tempting, with how many times we owe you the safety of our planet, but it isn't your place to tell us what to do."

"That's the thing about you Humans," he said casually. "Always so sure of yourselves. Beating your path open to the end of the universe, you are."

"That's never been a solely Human failing, has it?" she said archly.

"Welllll," he said, then grinned, caught out.

"I'll make you a promise, Doctor," Harriet said. "You continue to fight to reshape the entire universe with your sneaky, underhanded tactics, to make the world a better place with every weapon at your disposal... and I'll do the same with mine. Deal?"

He leaned back onto his heels, raising his eyebrows. "Oh, I'm much better at it."

"I don't doubt that."

"Can't think of a better idea." He flashed that smile again. "Prime Minister."

"Good." She smiled back, politely. "Now get out of my office. I have work to do."

He chuckled and swaggered to the doors. She turned around before the latch clicked, mind already back on picking up the pieces of the mess.

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Date: 2008-04-20 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resolute.livejournal.com
Oooh, this is great! This is really nice! I love how Harriet can almost see the shape of the Doctor in the world . . . she's met him enough times to she the ghost he leaves. This is really nicely done!

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Date: 2008-04-25 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schmevil.livejournal.com
I love how Harriet can almost see the shape of the Doctor in the world

Nicely put.

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! (She says, weeks later.) I wanted to focus on Harriet, but the Doctor is such a presence in this universe even in his absence. Thanks for reading!

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Date: 2008-04-20 02:34 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] netgirl-y2k.livejournal.com
Oh, I love the Doctor's awkward sort of apology to Harriet. Lovely remix of a lovely drabble.

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you! I may have a slight fumbly-Doctor-apology fetish. *glances at body of work so far* I'm glad you liked it!

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Date: 2008-04-20 04:24 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sophinisba
I really like the way you write the relationship between her and the doctor, especially at the end (I can just hear those lines from both of them) but also in the dream, her trying to deal with him being unreasonable when she can't even speak. Great job with this!

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! I love Harriet, and I do often think of the plight of normal people attempting to have a conversation about responsibility with the Doctor. ;) Glad you liked!

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Date: 2008-04-20 01:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mymatedave.livejournal.com
this is fantastic.

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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Date: 2008-04-20 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fallingtowers.livejournal.com
Oh, this is wonderful! I'd never have thought that you would choose any of my drabbles to expand upon, and what you have done with it is simply smashing. Harriet Jones was one of my favourite minor characters on the show, and I love the way in which you showcase her determination and strength, her stubbornness and her final reconciliation with the Doctor. Thank you for writing this!

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Date: 2008-04-26 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it! *happydance* You have such... *complete* stories and your style is very different than mine (in a good way) that this was really a fun challenge. (And now I'm full of commentary and meta. Yay, meta.) Thank you for the original, and this gave me such an excuse to go through and read all your work, which was awesome. And now I can actually go comment on it. ;)

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Date: 2008-04-20 03:04 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] eve11
Fantastic story. I love the Doctor owning up to his mistakes at the end. Wonderful remix, just lovely.

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thanks! Oh, the Doctor--he just gets so excited and invested in things. I love fic wherein he gets to go back and try to fix things, or episodes like School Reunion. Glad you liked it!

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Date: 2008-04-20 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com
A great take on Harriet Jones! I love how convincingly you portray her as a politician, with the details of her staff's reaction when Harold Saxon swept everyone of their feet, her courage and and stubborness, and that final conversation with the Doctor is just made of win.

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I am a sucker for people telling the Doctor that he is wrong. (I think I'm going to really enjoy this season of New Who, when I get around to watching more of it. ;) Or not... not wrong, exactly, just that he is Doing That Thing He Does, and he needs to take a step back. I love Harriet; this was fun to work with. And I am glad and flattered that you liked it. :)

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Date: 2008-04-20 06:24 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] beatrice_otter
Yay for Harriet Jones, Prime Minister!

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Yes! The world's great age begins anew, the golden years return!

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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Date: 2008-04-20 11:32 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com
Lovely characterisation here - I enjoyed this.

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

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Date: 2008-04-21 03:00 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] zvi-likes-tv.livejournal.com
I like how she both calls the Doctor out on overreaching and admits that he's probably more skilled at defending the Earth simultaneously. And I love that she won't remain defeated, all the way to the bitter end, since that turns into a sort of melancholy beginning.

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Date: 2008-05-01 07:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
*nod* Oh, yeah, I love the Doctor's obvious skill in defending the Earth and saving the day, it's just that sometimes he needs to get Told. Thank you so much; I'm glad you liked it!

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Date: 2008-04-21 04:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] avendya.livejournal.com
[livejournal.com profile] rivrea pointed me here, and wow - you've captured Harriet Jones wonderfully here.

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Date: 2008-05-01 08:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thanks! She's so wonderful--I felt so awful for her at the end of The Christmas Invasion.

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Date: 2008-04-21 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com
Ooooo, a nice and sympathetic look at Harriet Jones. A lovely piece of characterization for both her and the Doctor.

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Date: 2008-05-11 06:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Sorry I'm so late on the response. Glad you liked it!

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Date: 2008-04-22 10:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aralias.livejournal.com
this is great! there ought to be more harriet jones appreciation out there, because she is great. admittedly, i can see why the country voted for harold saxon (and i love the dramatic irony of her putting her trust in the nation. woe indeed), but i'm glad that you gave harriet her golden age back. and that you gave the doctor a chance to apologise. badly, obviously, but he's the doctor. that is what he does. dialogue is perfect too. particularly harriet's.

p.s. never heard the word 'jouncing' before but it's good, i like it.

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Date: 2008-05-11 07:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! (Sorry it took me so long to respond.) I love Harriet; I really thought she deserved better than to be taken down by such a cheap trick. I'm glad the dialogue worked for you!

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Date: 2008-04-23 04:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deborah-judge.livejournal.com
Oh, much, much love for this story. I love Harriet's strength and the way she stands up to the Doctor. She's come into herself here. The ending is wonderful, with the Doctor and Harriet facing each other down. She doesn't change his mind, but she doesn't have to, she's got the power now.

I'm thinking back to her first episode, when she continues on with her business of hospital funding after aliens have landed. That was hard to make sense of in the episode, but here you really turn it into a strength - her ability to just keep going, just keep doing her job and picking up the pieces, no matter what else is going on.

Harriet here just keeps going, she's not going to take time away from work to get distracted by revenge, but her dream was wonderful, with the tension between wishing the Doctor had actually saved her more effectively and her exasperation that he thought it was his business to save her - and control her - at all. Her identification with Martha makes so much sense. Harriet's months of background work and planning with Torchwood parallels nicely with Martha's year-long journey. And of course the Doctor takes over for both of them in the end.

Also:
"Regeneration machine?" Deborah, another old political warhorse, asked. "We could use one of those around here." Then she laughed, bitterly.

*beams*

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Date: 2008-05-11 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! (Also, sorry about the late response--this last month has been packed.)

Harriet is so awesome. She's determined and competent, and I didn't think she deserved to get taken down by a whisper campaign.

*chuckle* I suppose I should say in my experience, Deborahs are always awesome. ;)

Thanks for reading!

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Date: 2008-04-24 08:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] paranoidangel
I love this look at Harriet Jones, how she felt about being Prime Minister and the Doctor (and the Master) doing her out of that job.

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Date: 2008-05-11 07:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Sorry for the late reply. Glad you liked it!

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Date: 2008-04-25 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schmevil.livejournal.com
I really enjoyed this.

That the Doctor had no right to decide who lived, who died. Not in her country. Not on her watch.

and

"I'll make you a promise, Doctor," Harriet said. "You continue to fight to reshape the entire universe with your sneaky, underhanded tactics, to make the world a better place with every weapon at your disposal... and I'll do the same with mine. Deal?"

Are great illustrations of the awesome that is Harriet.

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Date: 2008-05-12 09:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! (Sorry about the late reply; I am lame.)

I love Harriet having agency in the show. Even though she winds up being too late because the Doctor got there first, I love that she went ahead and got a solution, she dug one up to use to protect London. And that she takes responsibility for her actions. She's so cool!

Thank you for reading!

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Date: 2008-04-25 11:28 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wondygal.livejournal.com
Oh, lovely. Great characterization, great scene with the dream and the actual argument she has against the Doctor's actions, great moment with the staff, great talk with the Doctor. I loved it.

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Date: 2008-05-12 09:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Sorry it took me so long to respond. Harriet is just awesome. I am a real fan of people being grown-up and responsible, especially around the Doctor, who needs that influence, I think. ;) Thank you for reading!

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Date: 2008-04-27 02:07 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] deaka.livejournal.com
Ooh, lovely. I like that the Doctor realised he owed her something, in a way. And I do like that she called him on his behaviour.

Great work!

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Date: 2008-05-12 09:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! And sorry for the late response. I love that the Doctor gets to go out and do wild things, but I also love that there are responsible adults around to make sure the world gets to keep running. ;) Thanks for reading!

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Date: 2010-02-11 11:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dawn-queen.livejournal.com
Loved this! Nice to see Harriet getting a happy ending.

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