I have a MASSIVE urge to flail. Massive. You have no idea. I'm usually more constructive with feedback, and maybe I'll get to it later, when my brain is kadsjl;fjakl;bvhsiulgrnjemilhersjgkulbhtudfsilkhyaewjdrsgihpobkua34wiestugjh like that. These were gorgeous. GORGEOUS. kdjfa;jfka;hlgerjag;jr
I loved the little parallel of the "ear over his heart" moments. I adore when writers include the same image at the beginning and end of a piece.
She clutched at him, fiercely, tightly, to prove he was real or because if he disappeared, she wanted to go with him. That was an incredibly heart-breaking line. And I'd imagine that whenever she thought she was ready to move on from him, something like THAT happened in her brain and she couldn't.
The graffiti love letter was such an awesome way of putting it. Loved that a lot. And I think that when House dies (assuming he goes before she does) Stacy will be devastated because her concern was keeping him alive.
These were amazing, really. I can't decide if they make me want to throw in the towel or run off to get back to writing my H/S fic furiously, because, really, that was the best I've ever read of the two of them. The original was awesome, too, but this...this was just GUH.
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Date: 2008-04-28 08:26 pm (UTC)I loved the little parallel of the "ear over his heart" moments. I adore when writers include the same image at the beginning and end of a piece.
She clutched at him, fiercely, tightly, to prove he was real or because if he disappeared, she wanted to go with him. That was an incredibly heart-breaking line. And I'd imagine that whenever she thought she was ready to move on from him, something like THAT happened in her brain and she couldn't.
The graffiti love letter was such an awesome way of putting it. Loved that a lot. And I think that when House dies (assuming he goes before she does) Stacy will be devastated because her concern was keeping him alive.
These were amazing, really. I can't decide if they make me want to throw in the towel or run off to get back to writing my H/S fic furiously, because, really, that was the best I've ever read of the two of them. The original was awesome, too, but this...this was just GUH.