I like how you paced this -- the jumping back and forth echoes what I did with the original, and the insights into John's side of things make me even more sad for the two of them.... John at the end, sitting on the grass at Rodney's feet, was so sad -- it made me cry.
Thank you for writing this for me -- it's cool to see what someone else did with it.
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Date: 2008-04-20 02:35 am (UTC)I like how you paced this -- the jumping back and forth echoes what I did with the original, and the insights into John's side of things make me even more sad for the two of them.... John at the end, sitting on the grass at Rodney's feet, was so sad -- it made me cry.
Thank you for writing this for me -- it's cool to see what someone else did with it.