YAY! Oh, I love this! It's probably my favorite of my own stories, so I'm so glad you chose it. You took something that was sparse and remixed it into a real narrative with depth. I love that you brought in other characters, and your Hank-voice is super spot-on. He's totally impossible to write without sounding like he's barfing a thesaurus, but you write him as though he's flesh and blood (and fur).
The manly brawling is, of course, my favorite part. Scott and Logan beating the snot out of eachother as a means of communication is something I can't get enough of. And the part with Jean at the end made me tear up. It's sentimental in the best sort of way.
Thank you so so sosososo much for this. This is my first year of Remix, and I'm thrilled that I got this. It's amazing.
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Date: 2008-04-20 04:18 pm (UTC)The manly brawling is, of course, my favorite part. Scott and Logan beating the snot out of eachother as a means of communication is something I can't get enough of. And the part with Jean at the end made me tear up. It's sentimental in the best sort of way.
Thank you so so sosososo much for this. This is my first year of Remix, and I'm thrilled that I got this. It's amazing.