We Invented the Remix...Redux 6

What I mean is - the original is very face-value, just a fun little bit of almost-porn, of Ray's reaction to Fraser's watching him. But you make it something that takes the assumption that Fraser's watching him out of simple affection into darker territory, you turn the reader's view of "what is happening here" on its head. (Which is an approach I really like in remixes, and used in my first HP remix.)