I will come back and comment more, srsly, but this is so awesome. I can't even adequately describe how it fits in with my original fic, which was only meant to dance with the episode itself. It's like a complete Teyla-izing of it, a, I daresay, feminizing of what's this masculine, fighter-pilot boom action strategy fic... just full of relationships and personalities and yet it's the *same* drumbeat of urgency. I love how we go deeper into the fog of confusion (and friendship with Kate! win! and more Elizabeth! Win!) and yet confront exactly the same Wraith deception, with the same (or better) tension and subtlety.
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Date: 2008-04-20 06:06 pm (UTC)tl;dr It's the yin to my yang! Thanks!