Ooooh, I really like where you took this, and how much happens in the banter and by-play between them -- definitely the same tone as my piece, but taken to a new place. I really like the additional scene, and the emotions between them, and everything about Giles.
He looked shocked, as if a reading hadn't occurred to him; that he'd only come to apologise.
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Date: 2008-04-21 04:59 pm (UTC)He looked shocked, as if a reading hadn't occurred to him; that he'd only come to apologise.
Exactly.
Thanks so much for writing for me!