EEEEEEEEEEEEEE! You know how when you're writing a scene between two people and you have to imagine the reactions and thoughts of the other, non-POV person in order to work out what they say and how they react, even though it doesn't get put in the story itself? YES! YES! YES! You totally and completely nailed EXACTLY how I pictured and conceived of Cedric! (except the cancer bit - I didn't even think of that at all! I loved that!)
And I loved how you expanded the bet scene, and Oh! The scene with Remus! And Caleb! And Cedric seeing the RoR for the first time! SO MUCH YAY!!!!!!!
**Oh! And the little bits about him seeing the Ravenclaw team in a late night strategy session and Mrs Norris getting into Sprout's catnip plants! i LOVE LOVE LOVE details like that! Yay!
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Date: 2008-04-20 06:22 pm (UTC)And I loved how you expanded the bet scene, and Oh! The scene with Remus! And Caleb! And Cedric seeing the RoR for the first time! SO MUCH YAY!!!!!!!
**Oh! And the little bits about him seeing the Ravenclaw team in a late night strategy session and Mrs Norris getting into Sprout's catnip plants! i LOVE LOVE LOVE details like that! Yay!
*on to the next part*