trying to navigate the space between being River's brother, savior, father, and jailer
Yes! That last word is especially apt. The key phrases from the source story were "Simon buys a lock," and then at the end of the story, the lock being sold. I just took that lock and made it internal, and very hard to give up.
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Date: 2008-04-27 01:26 pm (UTC)Yes! That last word is especially apt. The key phrases from the source story were "Simon buys a lock," and then at the end of the story, the lock being sold. I just took that lock and made it internal, and very hard to give up.
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