Excellent story. I really enjoyed reading the first version and then the remix. Very rich and finely wrought both of them. Even though I've never seen this show, I so get the sense of the relationships from the stories I've read. Very nicely done.
Um, I think you meant backwards where you typed "he's flying bakwards."
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Date: 2008-04-19 08:44 pm (UTC)Um, I think you meant backwards where you typed "he's flying bakwards."