I like the idea of this remix, changing around who's who, and seeing how that works in this new world. I had a lot of fun going back and forth between the original and the remix and seeing how similar words meant different things and how they stayed the same.
And then this line kind of killed me: "You're here?" John asked, breathing him in. "Really? You're really here?"
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Date: 2008-04-20 06:28 pm (UTC)And then this line kind of killed me: "You're here?" John asked, breathing him in. "Really? You're really here?"
Oh John!