This story is very hot, but it also hit me in places that made me think, and I actually had to go off for a day and come back, to review it! I think part of it is because I can get very emotionally attached to characters in stories, and here, I think I latched onto Rodney, so when he left, I had to, too.

In any case, I really liked the expanding images from the original, particularly the outfit Teyla has on, and the closeness of the events compared to how I perceived them at first. It's very John, too, and I simply adore (though it hurts!) what Rodney says as he leaves, because it's true, he's not the type to accept being steamrolled, far from it. Great remix!