Oh, depressed!Wilson -- one of my favorite Housefic genres. (I mean it.) This does a great job of both toning down and sharpening the angst of the original story. The short sentences really underscore his unhappiness/desperation. And -- *blink* -- you know, I don't tend to like first- or second-person POVs in fanfic, but I didn't even notice here until I saw the comment above. Huh. Good job there; it felt like the right voice for Wilson when he's feeling like this, which, sadly, I'd bet was quite often during the Tritter arc. Also, love the detail of him smoking one of those "medical" joints.
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Date: 2008-04-19 09:02 pm (UTC)