Man. This is beautiful, and I don't know what to say. Except thank you so very, very much.
There's so many parts I could pick out. Just the way you expanded upon tiny feelings and images is such an addition. The paragraph about the map is delicious. I'm very fond of the last two sections as well, simply because they fit so well.
So thank you! You've done a marvellous job and made a fantastic story! I hope you love yours as much as I love yours :)
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Date: 2008-04-26 10:21 pm (UTC)There's so many parts I could pick out. Just the way you expanded upon tiny feelings and images is such an addition. The paragraph about the map is delicious. I'm very fond of the last two sections as well, simply because they fit so well.
So thank you! You've done a marvellous job and made a fantastic story! I hope you love yours as much as I love yours :)