I love the description of them all at the carnival. The idea of River squooshing Simon close to Kaylee is darling. And Book helping Wash in the knocking down of bottles? Priceless.
And this line: If she would always be his phantom limb, even when she was, in a sense, right in front of him.
was one of those wow lines that I'd wished I'd written.
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Date: 2008-04-24 05:46 pm (UTC)And this line: If she would always be his phantom limb, even when she was, in a sense, right in front of him.
was one of those wow lines that I'd wished I'd written.