This is brilliant. I love everything about it - all the little details in the opening scene were perfect, with Dean mentally complaining about Sam's smleeing feet and flicking his sleep dust at him. Just all those real brotherly things.
I liked how so many details of their lives slipped out - the way Dean automatically sees the oooking as his responsibility, the fact he's dropped out of high school. And it made me happy to see John come across as someone who loves his sons and does his best for them, despite all his flaws.
This feels like a poisontaster story to me - if it's not I know that'll come across as a compliment, so I don't feel nervous about saying it. Guess I'll have to check back in a week to see ;P
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Date: 2008-04-20 10:33 am (UTC)I liked how so many details of their lives slipped out - the way Dean automatically sees the oooking as his responsibility, the fact he's dropped out of high school. And it made me happy to see John come across as someone who loves his sons and does his best for them, despite all his flaws.
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Thank you for a lovely story!