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Date: 2008-04-24 03:33 am (UTC)
Very interesting. I liked seeing all of the details about what Rodney did, and how he was feeling. Him using the lotion on himself and his thoughts about John were very hot. I also liked Radek, I think you nicely captured the connection between him and Rodney. As I was thinking about this remix, I realized that for most of it I was expecting to also see Rodney's POV of the actual skin-shedding scene, but I think it actually worked better without that. It very much folded itself in around the corners and edges of the original fic.
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