So sorry I haven't responded to this before! As you may or may not have seen on remixers_lounge or on my LJ, I was off on vacation with essentially no internet access. But I'm here now, and very pleased to have this story to come back to! This is a neat take on the original, with Jack seeing not just Sarah's alternate reality, but all those other possibilities as well. I especially like how you used the whole "gas mask" incident, which is beautifully chilling and makes for some really interesting emotional resonances for Jack, but would probably never have occurred to me.
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Date: 2008-04-26 06:05 pm (UTC)Many thanks, O remixer! :)