The language is in this is just lovely -- She opens the earthenware dish to her left and removes two teaflowers, dry, knurled things the color of dust. And I like the way you've brought the story back around to the beginning of the original, but this time with such a present sense of coming home.
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Date: 2008-04-20 10:41 am (UTC)