Loved this! I like that Alec's trying to give Max what she wants, even though it's not what he wants (and without checking to make sure that it actually *is* what she wants), while Max avoids actually saying what she wants until she's practically forced into it. That seems to very accurately reflect the dysfunction of their relationship :)
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Date: 2008-04-21 12:15 am (UTC)A great expansion/interpretation of the original!