I've seen folks talk about taking a fic and remixing it so that the foreground is in the background and vice versa - your story really catches that nicely.
Girl's still crazy as a box of weasles, and no mistake; she's fast and mean and unpredictable and smarter by half than will let him ever be entirely at ease.
I really like this line. For me, it hints that he part of Mal that doesn't like anything to be easy and for everything to be a challenge, so the fact that this is River is right in his comfort zone. But that might just be me. *g*
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Date: 2008-04-23 01:10 am (UTC)Girl's still crazy as a box of weasles, and no mistake; she's fast and mean and unpredictable and smarter by half than will let him ever be entirely at ease.
I really like this line. For me, it hints that he part of Mal that doesn't like anything to be easy and for everything to be a challenge, so the fact that this is River is right in his comfort zone. But that might just be me. *g*