The first four paragraphs of the second section are really well-crafted -- the obvious observation about Jean being impossible to surprise, seguing understandably to poker faces, nicely seguing to Remy's interest in Jean (which totally reminded me of Logan), and a nice step to his vulnerability (which I think is both unlike and like Logan).
And his desire to remember her "beautiful and unsurpriseable and oh, so alive" is beautifully phrased and oh so poignant.
> The sky is clear, thanks to Ororo. He doubts she even did it consciously. > Jean deserves no less.
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Date: 2008-04-26 12:56 am (UTC)The first four paragraphs of the second section are really well-crafted -- the obvious observation about Jean being impossible to surprise, seguing understandably to poker faces, nicely seguing to Remy's interest in Jean (which totally reminded me of Logan), and a nice step to his vulnerability (which I think is both unlike and like Logan).
And his desire to remember her "beautiful and unsurpriseable and oh, so alive" is beautifully phrased and oh so poignant.
> The sky is clear, thanks to Ororo. He doubts she even did it consciously.
> Jean deserves no less.
Oh, heart.