ext_1908 ([identity profile] raisintorte.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-20 03:06 am (UTC)

::reads twice::

What a cool remix - I really just love the style of it all - the tone and the characters and really - it's just a fantastic remix. Very different with hints of the same.

I love that it totally stands on its own as a story. You don't miss anything reading one without the other, but they are cooler together.

(He doesn't think there are any traps he didn't hit on the way up, because Cameron Mitchell is nothing if not accomplished at walking flat into traps. His right foot is still tingling.)

::loves:: Cam is just - this is the Cam that I love. SO MUCH.

The only surprise then, really, is that Sheppard wasn't sitting on the front porch with a shotgun.

I loved the little touches like this - really, just made it all so great.

Sheppard smiles at Cam, slow and predatory, like he can read Cam's mind or maybe is considering going at him with a knife, and Cam sets his glass down because either of those options is best dealt with with empty hands, and for good measure he unfastens his wristwatch and tosses it onto the table, where it lands with a solid thunk.

I love Cam taking off his watch - very cool.

(It turns out it is sex. Which is a relief, kind of, because Cam isn't really up for a knife fight when all he has is a potato peeler.)

AWESOME. Really, I wish I had more coherent words, but that line is just made of pure awesome.

THANK YOU! This is the kind of story everyone secretly hopes they get when they sign up for remix. :-)

on a silly note - I had to laugh when I saw this posted, because I had this sock puppet account last year and the icon you used is the icon I uploaded to post with my story.

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