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2008-04-30 10:35 pm (UTC)
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Wow. This is fantastic.
I love the omniscient - almost meta - narration, and the measured matter-of-fact tone somehow highlights the tension between the characters.
In fact, the whole tone of this piece just works so well for me: excellent writing.
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I love the omniscient - almost meta - narration, and the measured matter-of-fact tone somehow highlights the tension between the characters.
In fact, the whole tone of this piece just works so well for me: excellent writing.