Dearest remix author, I apologise for the tardy feedback to this fic!
I really love that you've turned a fic that wasn't dialogue-heavy in the slightest into one that is totally more... human, in a way, because there's more human interaction and action in this fic. Which is definitely a good thing, and I think this fic is originally one of my weaker ones. I think it's a marked improvement on mine, anyway, and you manage to get the voices so spot on for what I had in mind for the characters.
One thing that really works is how each section has evolved into anecdotal scenes to make it feel more fleshed-out and interesting. At any rate, it's way more interesting than the navel-gazing tripe I wrote, so thanks extremely much for doing such a good job.
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Date: 2008-04-27 07:41 am (UTC)I really love that you've turned a fic that wasn't dialogue-heavy in the slightest into one that is totally more... human, in a way, because there's more human interaction and action in this fic. Which is definitely a good thing, and I think this fic is originally one of my weaker ones. I think it's a marked improvement on mine, anyway, and you manage to get the voices so spot on for what I had in mind for the characters.
One thing that really works is how each section has evolved into anecdotal scenes to make it feel more fleshed-out and interesting. At any rate, it's way more interesting than the navel-gazing tripe I wrote, so thanks extremely much for doing such a good job.