ext_28143 ([identity profile] brigantine1.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-28 07:08 pm (UTC)

Ray said, "Yeah, Fraser. Watch this."

Love this! This tells me Ray knows exactly what sort of desperate stunt Fraser just pulled, and he's not only fine with it, he understands why Fraser did it. Coming back at Fraser like it's some kind of friendly competition lets Fraser not feel sorry - he's busted, but he doesn't have to regret it.

I quite like the way you portrayed his relationship with RayV. As Nos pointed out, it's not that RayV's a bad guy or wasn't genuinely pleased being with Fraser, but there was only so far he could go. He did the best he could.

I enjoyed this very much! :)

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