This story was really good. I loved how it took the original and updated it to incorporate current canon, and teased out that feeling of aloneness in the original and front-loaded it. This was a great job.

One critique (a formatting issue): when you post stories online, please, please, please leave a line between each paragraph. I had to copy this story to a word processor and reformat it before I could read it, and I almost didn't bother.

P.S. I think you have a really great handle on Bailey. I would not have guessed it was your first time writing her.