aadler: (MutantEnemy)
Aadler ([personal profile] aadler) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-21 05:05 pm (UTC)

Having been familiar already with the original fic (in fact, I suggested some improvements in the language, which [livejournal.com profile] sroni obligingly incorporated), I feel qualified to call this an improvement. The story is well and quietly told; the humor is nice but not overdone, the emotions likewise, and the characters as we know them can indeed be heard in the dialogue.

This was nice. I’m glad to have seen it.

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