Oh, wow, dude. First of all, congratulations! This was so not at all the story I had thought would be remixed, but you did an amazing job. It's an angle that I really never considered for the original story, both with the Wincest and the saving, but you took it and made it work really well. The writing is excellent, the characters are spot on, and overall: wow. I am so impressed.

Thanks so much!