http://tourdefierce.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] tourdefierce.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-21 12:45 am (UTC)

I love that you picked this piece. I wrote it for R/T Challenge and it felt incomplete but I didn't know what to do with it. You've finished it.

I love that Harry tells him now, is honest with Teddy from the very start of their relationship and I love Harry. Awkward and beautiful and real and little.

"Oi," Harry says, prodding Teddy's hand a few more times, "stop that." He presses the pad of his finger into Teddy's palm, which achieves something at least when Teddy closes his hand around it and squeezes. Harry decides this is the best he's going to get and forges on. It's such a beautiful clip of the two of them.

a shocking woollen rainbow made by Mrs. Weasley I squeed just a little bit here.

Harry looks down at Teddy expectantly, although he is not entirely clear on what he is expecting. Teddy just gurgles and blinks up at Harry in return. He reaches out his tiny, saliva-shiny right hand and takes hold of Harry's thumb. His lips press together in a little frown that puckers his chin, turning it into a field of dents and dimples. Just brilliantly simple and true.

I loved this. It's great and you should be very proud. I'm glad I could inspire you to write this. I'm very lucky to have been able to have you write this.

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