When I looked through your stories, I was a bit intimidated, because many were so long and intricate, and showed a much deeper knowledge of HP canon than I have. This one was short enough that I felt I could rework the whole thing, and I thought it might make an interesting parallel to the nifty ambiguity of the original if Ginny knew all along.
I tried to get across that she was mad at Harry, but understood that he acted more out of insecurity than a desire to control her. (And, yes, I did go with the assumption that the potion strengthened feelings she already had.) She didn't really forgive him until she realized he'd given her the antidote as well. I found it a fun challenge to write from the POV of someone not entirely in control of her emotions, and I'm happy if I managed it even a little well. I'm relieved you don't hate it! :)
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I tried to get across that she was mad at Harry, but understood that he acted more out of insecurity than a desire to control her. (And, yes, I did go with the assumption that the potion strengthened feelings she already had.) She didn't really forgive him until she realized he'd given her the antidote as well. I found it a fun challenge to write from the POV of someone not entirely in control of her emotions, and I'm happy if I managed it even a little well. I'm relieved you don't hate it! :)