Holy shit. Everyone and their grandmother has been reccing this story, so I figured it couldn't POSSIBLY live up to all the hype. Was I ever wrong. This is a mindblowing piece of work. Utterly magnificent in all its horrible, gutwrenching beauty. The passage with Jamie made me cry, and your Eighth Doctor and Leela section is simply magnificent. You captured both of their voices so perfectly it was actually startling. And don't even get me started on the bit with Susan. Good grief. This piece deserves every single drop of praise it gets. An absolute masterwork.