Eeeeee! I am really pleased that you picked this story—it's an older one, but one of my favorites—and I love what you did with it. I love Oz-fic in general, and it's fun to see him and Remus here, since we don't see a whole lot of them together (and nothing of just the two of them, I don't think) in the original. I was really tickled by the random things you included from v. 1: the milkgrass tea, the bread-baking, and the OCs especially. Thank you for this!