This was an adorable story! I love River and Dawn, and the way that's so easily in the background - not that it is unimportant, but that it isn't the front and center of the story. It's natural, this isn't a story about two women falling in love, they're just a part of a bigger story, and I like that very much.
Caridad is kind of awesome here, too, the way she sees some of the things going on and only hears about others, but the story is still complete.
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Date: 2008-04-20 12:41 am (UTC)Caridad is kind of awesome here, too, the way she sees some of the things going on and only hears about others, but the story is still complete.
Thank you for writing this story.