ext_2781 ([identity profile] incidental-fire.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-25 03:44 am (UTC)

Marvelous. I have to admit that the torture warning made me nervous, and I was rather glad when the original fic didn't fully describe that part, but it was done really well. I agree with some of the other commenters that seeing John's faith that his team would rescue him slowly deteriorate was heart-wrenching, but it helped that I was pretty sure he'd make it through. :) The exploding glowbugs were an awesome touch, and I think John's inner voice was spot-on. Very nicely done.

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