ext_11441 ([identity profile] rose-griffes.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-20 01:45 pm (UTC)

Lee dislikes imbalance, a natural inclination.
I think I'm in love with this sentence. Oh, Lee...

Boomer will learn to reassimilate. Sooner would be better. She still denies God's will, denies His very existence.
All the pieces you brought in for this are beautifully fitted together. Foreshadowing Boomer's sad continuation, the meetings between Kara and Leoben, putting in her connection to Helo. I really liked all of this.

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