Oh, wow, you must have put in a lot of effort to remix such a long story! Your version really shows the different strengths of first person versus third person. I think one of your strongest scenes is the one where House tells Charlie to get a certificate to Victoria's Secret for Wilson. The scene with Cuddy and Wilson in the exam room, while Charlie and House listened, was also good. It's always fun to see an expansion on a prank war. However, I would suggest that you edit to the default font, rather than large and bold; I found it difficult to read, and I ended up copypasting the story into Word so that I could change the text size. Also, I think it would be helpful if you added a link to part two at the end of part one. I'm going out on a limb to guess that maybe this is your first remix? If so, then welcome! It's always great to have new people in the challenge.