poisontaster: character Wen Qing from The Untamed (Sam and Dean)
poisontaster ([personal profile] poisontaster) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-19 10:46 pm (UTC)

I really like how little talking there is here; it's so sensory. Small, physical details layering like silt, building up to something greater than their parts. I love the connection it evokes; two people who hardly have to talk to understand each other's meaning, for whom pleasing each other comes as second nature. That's what draws me to Sam and Dean in the first place and I love how you show that here.

I have to admit I was curious to see how much could be done with just that drabble, but I think this is lovely. Thank you!

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