Oh, this is wonderful! I love the insight you've given into Calypso here, caught between woman and goddess, into her backstory with Jack, and into what more she might want from Will than his heart. I like the reversals, how he tastes of earth and iron and how she lays her ear on his chest at the end to hear the forge. How she recognizes his essence as he does hers.

Tia Dalma, he called her, a name she’d picked out for herself.

Jack Sparrow, she called him, just the same.

I liked the parallel there--always liked the idea that Jack picked that name rather than was given it.

Brilliantly done!