Elizabeth S ([identity profile] hermionesviolin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-21 07:38 pm (UTC)

Ooh, I love the last line in particular (the echo of the last line of the original, and what it says about them both).

And I also really like the repetition of her body as a prison and the way(s) she finds to (almost) escape it.

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