Oh, WOW. This is truly amazing, and I love that you brought something that I only thought of but you brought your own images and your own story into it, made it truly your own. That it was my story that gave you that idea, that it gave you all these words is something that awes me, because you gave life to a Remus and Lily that I only ever thought of in parts, and gave them so much. And may I also say that I absolutely love the Marauders' interaction, especially how they bantered but still forecast the impending tension that the war will bring them. And oh, the ending...just made me want to weep. O

This is amazing, I love what you wrote, and not only because you remixed mine--but completely on its own, devoid of what's mine or yours. This is a great story. Thank you for sharing!