Wow. I don't really read Heroes fanfic usually, but someone on my flist recced this community, and so when I saw the tag for The Haitian, I couldn't resist, because he's always been my favorite character on that show, and such a mystery.
I went and read the original story first, which was excellent, but this is amazing too. What a great response to the Bob-centered piece. I loved the way you reworked the memory editing idea so that it retained its original chilling nature and yet also had touches of mercy here and there. And it was so interesting to hear how The Haitian viewed his masters at The Company, how he sees himself as a captive much like Elle, but he also can stay emotionally detached enough from his captivity to still believe in a future where he might be free and might someday be able to give Elle some of her positive memories back.
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I went and read the original story first, which was excellent, but this is amazing too. What a great response to the Bob-centered piece. I loved the way you reworked the memory editing idea so that it retained its original chilling nature and yet also had touches of mercy here and there. And it was so interesting to hear how The Haitian viewed his masters at The Company, how he sees himself as a captive much like Elle, but he also can stay emotionally detached enough from his captivity to still believe in a future where he might be free and might someday be able to give Elle some of her positive memories back.
Great job!