ext_2734 ([identity profile] kassrachel.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-21 09:17 pm (UTC)

She was unsure of the wisdom of this maneuver at all. Her relationship with Elizabeth is very different from her relationship with Ronon, an understatement of thought that makes her smile. Still, they have both expressed a certain...vulnerability about sharing her with each other. Nothing overt. Nothing directly spoken, but Teyla would not have served her people nearly so well if she had not learned to hear more than simply the words that come from another's lips.

Oh, lovely.

I really like the way you've expanded and extended the original, shown us what led up to it and how they came to be who they are with one another.

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