ext_67711 ([identity profile] sambethe.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-20 01:55 pm (UTC)

This is really lovely. I enjoyed how you expanded on the first, taking brief mentions and breathing new life in to them. I also particularly liked how this captures all of them in mundane moments, simply living life.

And this:

but before they’re quite gone, he sees Peter give Remus a new copy of the magazine, not yet besmirched by Harry’s jammy fingertips, and notes the quiet smile that passes between them.

That nearly broke my heart.

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