I can't tell you how pleased I am that this worked for you -- and that I was tricksy enough to get away with it. (I'm a much better liar online than in person, apparently!)

We should talk about this more because I *CAN'T TELL YOU* how hard it was not to have you to discuss this with. imaginaryalice was awesomely helpful with the Lorna parts, and harmonyangel was ninja-beta, as always -- as was inlovewithnight who hardly knows who these characters are but is awesome about humoring me. So a great team effort all around, which all circles back to having such a great original to work with in the first place. (I knew INSTANTLY I wanted to remix that story but literally went through outlines for 3 totally separate remixes before settling on this one almost by accident).