but here the future is still cloudy and what Simon is sacrificing means a ot more.

Exactly. I'm glad to here that this worked.


The furniture thing felt a bit out of place the first time it was used and I had to start over again to get the flow of the thing.

Good call. This was my first time world building at this level and I'm sure I got a wee bit carried away.


You need an artist to turn this into a graphic novel.

::grins like a fool:: Quite possibly the best compliment ever. Thank you!