Wow. I totally loved that ending. I was really excited to see this story remixed, because I loved the original and had kind of wondered what sort of adventures Jo and George might be having together. I love the way you complicated their relationship so much by shading it with Jo's extremely complicated and ambivalent relationship with the brothers Winchester, as well as her own insecurities and sense of morality.

And that dream with Ash--wow, so vivid and wonderful! Really, so many of the original details of this were fantastic, like the fact that she stayed in the bakery so that Marie didn't get completely taken advantage of by the parolees.

This was fantastic, and I enjoyed it a lot.