I'm reading this before the original, so it'll definitely be cool to see what you're building upon. It feels like there's a lot hidden in plain sight-- much like dreams tend to do. :) I love the repetition of the phrase "Before John and his red Corvette," as it gave me shivers to see it again and again; it build up a sort of anticipation of what Rodney's dreams would be like *after* John and his Corvette showed up.
And this does come out as McSheep. Oh, yes it does.
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I'm reading this before the original, so it'll definitely be cool to see what you're building upon. It feels like there's a lot hidden in plain sight-- much like dreams tend to do. :) I love the repetition of the phrase "Before John and his red Corvette," as it gave me shivers to see it again and again; it build up a sort of anticipation of what Rodney's dreams would be like *after* John and his Corvette showed up.
And this does come out as McSheep. Oh, yes it does.