ext_2220 ([identity profile] spiralleds.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux08 2008-04-21 11:10 pm (UTC)

Wow. Really neat expansion of the story. The original emotional elements are all there, but expanded, and there's a whole exterior world, full of intrigue. I found the double agent idea with Book fascinating. You've got a gift for the voices.


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